Well I am in the process of going through some of my old stuff and editing it. Those of you guys who got a kick out of it the first time might wanna check out the edited version.
The narrative flow is a bit better, but since you have nothing to compare it to you could just go an earlier version I found HERE to see it.
The newer version is closer to my initial intention, make sure to check out the links I have added. It's like when those amateur editors re-did the Phantom Menace. Not like when Lucas fucked with the original Star Wars.
I have attempted fixing up my two posts with the most views...
Jessica Hawn
Steve Nash Hates His Fake Girlfriend
What else have I changed?
Well, for starters I am no longer employing random colors in my text. I now use color to denote a link to another site. I am trying to use different font sizes to show emotion now.
This post is dedicated to Molly, Foxxy and Jezzebel.
Attack of the INFP:
I thought that was just because I was a bad writer, apparently it is also a charcter flaw.
"Because they empathize so strongly with others, may soften the message too much."
You may not believe it but I do it.
"They can always find a more clever phrasing, so may have trouble letting go."
I still haven't let go. Some of you may noticed that I have changed this post 7 times.
4 comments:
Good stuff. Can't say I'm convinced to give the time of day to any white man who isn't visibly-carrying a gun, but does make me think a bit about my dismissiveness.
Thanks for the dedication! I even brought you a new fan. So I see the hurricanes didn't get to ya!
Thanks know it all!
Thanks foxxy!!! she's cute..(did I say that out loud?)
Yes you did you big perv! Tee hee hee.
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